17A - Elevator Pitch No. 2
1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IDnyqMTNazk
2)What stood out to me is that everyone agreed that my pitch was good. They thought the presentation, use of data, and idea was quality. However, there was one comment to mention that this entrepreneurial opportunity is more of a philanthropic jab rather than a profit churning corporation. So I made sure to mention this. I also added some graphics on a board to add to the presentation.
3) I added in that this opportunity is solely to help those in need, rather than to make mass amounts of profit. Also, I added graphics on a dry erase board to show a rough blueprint of what the houses will look like, as well as the data being presented forth.
Zach,
ReplyDeleteI you did a great job on your second elevator pitch! You have done a great job of taking the comments on your last post and making the changes necessary. Overall I think this elevator pitch is better than your first one. Your graphics in the background were a useful tool for us, the audience, to better understand your product.
Zach, you killed it, as always. Great pace, well thought out, and filled with facts. And it is a very reasonable thought to run a business that both benefits the employees and investors as well as the less fortunate, so don’t worry about that, though I like that you pointed out how the concept could be adapted for and adopted to other municipalities and different financial structures. Great job.
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